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#1  2009-10-28 01:13:05

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Since I was 7 years young, I already had a rival. Kapitbahay ko siya at isa siyang nakakainis na tao. Mayabang na mukhang ewan. Iniiwasan ko na nga, sunud pa rin nang sunod. Lilipat ako ng school, lilipat din siya. Buti na lang at never kaming naging magkasama sa iisang section, kundi nag kanda gera gera sa school.

Anyway,  I am Mannellie Delos Santos. I’m now in my fourth year in high school age 16 and hates a guy called Nikko Perez.

As mentioned sa taas, nakakainis talaga yan. He leads section 4B – With only boys– And I lead 4C – with only girls.

Nagsimula ang ang aming war noong 7 pa lang ako. Papansin kasi siya, sinira yung ginagawa kong sand castle sa park.. Tapos lagi pa akong binubully noon. Pero noon yun, I’m now fighting him for good. Even though best friends and parents niya at ang parents ko, there’s no way anything would actually change towards our relationship to each other.

But what if one day, the least thing I would want to happen, happened? [ANO RAW?]

My own worst enemy.. Will start living with us because his parents left for abroad..

This is my newest story. Thanks for my past readers. :D

NOTE:
I revised the plot , naisip ko kasi na magiging tragic yung kwento pag ganun yung bandang huli. =D

edited -- Nov.1 , 2009

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#2  2009-10-28 01:23:15

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hmmm... mukang maganda to ah,.

hehe..

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#3  2009-10-28 01:26:14

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second to comment. nice intro. yah. = )
can't wait for the next chap. : ))

btw,congratulations for the well-done story of yours. :thumbsup::thumbsup:

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#4  2009-10-28 01:51:19

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Wow. Lee Min Ho is one of the characters? :wow::wow:
And nice intro ha.
I'll support this. :thumbsup:=)


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#5  2009-10-28 04:32:38

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Haha, new storii.
Hmm, babawi ako dito.

Update!


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#6  2009-10-28 06:46:10

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naks ang benta ni ki bum ngaun aa. :lol: :lol:



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#7  2009-10-28 06:49:01

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hha:) nice. bgong kwento:D
lee min ho tska sandara park ? haha:)) aus lng, mjo bgay sila:)
NEXT :))

#8  2009-10-28 08:17:25

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new story na,
chapter 1 na po ? hehe :P



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#9  2009-10-28 08:19:52

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ui!mukhang maganda plot ah!
anyways,support ko po to!


#10  2009-10-28 08:40:38

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This will be a so good story again. :eh::thumbsup::thumbsup:
Next na. Again, congratulations. :]


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#11  2009-10-28 09:14:31

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game.
update na..... =)=)



#12  2009-10-28 17:41:05

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yey . update na .





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#13  2009-10-29 01:09:32

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♥ PROLOGUE ♥

Gumagawa ako ng castle at the park that day with my best friend, Rena.
We were only little girls who love playing dolls.

The other kids, yung mga kalalakihan, e andun sa kabilang side ng park.
Including the bully called Nikko.
He’s the son of my parents’ friend; na kapitbahay naming. He’s been bullying me since last year. Kahit ano namang sumbong ko e hindi naman ako pinapansin ni Mama at Papa.
Ewan ko ba, pero parang papansin yung dating sakin ni Nikko e.

“Lagyan natin ng flowers para maganda.” Rena said.

“Sige, sige.” I said, thrilled. Siyempre, dahil bata pa, kahit simpleng bagay e malaki na para samin di ba?

Rena left to the garden next to the park to pick flowers, kanila naman yun e.

I was left, inayus ko yung sand castle naming, we’re almost done, but suddenly..

“Hoy, Mannellie.”

The bully came with his friends.

“N-Nikko..”

“Anu nanamang kalokohan yang ginagawa mo?”

Nakakainis talaga ‘to. I did not take notice of him. Sayang ang oras ko.
“Pangit naman.”

Hindi ko pa rin siy pinansin.

He suddenly kicked the sand castle I was making.
I glared at him.
“Ano bang problema mo Nikko?!”

Rena came.

“H-Hala.. Yung castle..”

“Ano?” Nikko asked me.

Rena cried. This was the first time she cried.

“Rena..” I mumbled.

I looked at Nikko.
“Bakit ba ganyan ka?!”

I never cried when he bullies me. I just ignored him and tell it to my parents.. Pero never akong umiyak.
Pero ngayon.. Inis na inis na ako.

Tears were formed within my eyes and it fell down.

“M-Mannellie..” He muttered.

“I hate you.. Nikko. Hinding hindi kita mapapatawad!”

9 YEARS LATER ..

“Ma, alis na po ako!” I said tapos lumabas na ako.

It’s the second month since schooling began.

Naglalakad ako nun papuntang sakayan nang madaanan ko yung bahay ng mortal kong kaaway.
Si Nikko Perez.

He is a bully. A KSP. Lahat na ng pwedeng itawag.
Siya ang leader ng 4B na puro kalalakihan at ako ang leader ng 4C na puro girls naman.

I’ve been rivals with him since that day. Ayoko nang mag paapi sakanya.

I saw him come out from their house.
He saw me too, inirapan ko siya at nagpatuloy sa paglalakad.
Hay nako, aga aga, nasira na agad ang araw ko.

I knew he was walking from behind.
Pero hindi talaga ako lumingon.

Maya-maya..
Kapantay ko na siya?!

Malapit na kami sa sakayan.

“Isa na lang! Isa na lang! Aalis na!”

The barker yelled.
Nagpakiramdaman kami, I got prepared.

One.. Two..—

He rushed away.

“Madaya!!”

I rushed to follow him.
Hindi ako pwedeng maiwan ng jeep!

Dahil ako ang nauna!

“Teka!!”

“Mabagal ka pa rin!” He yelled back.

Lalo akong nainis.

“Anong sinabi mo?!!”

I sped up, naging kapantay ko na siya.

“Akala mo mauunahan mo ako!?” I said tapos gave him a leer.
He showed me a devilish grin.

“Yeah, I thought so. But I definitely would.”

He said then sped up away.

Hiningal na ako, I became slow.. I just saw him climb up to the jeepney.

Bago siya pumasok, he smiled at me then waved his hand too.

“See you at school.”

Then he went in, at umalis na ang jeep.

I clenched my fists.

“ARRGH! TAE KA NIKKO!!”


^^^^^^^^^

“Nalate ka ata ngayon.” Rena told me.

Katatapos ko lang pagalitan ng vice principal dahil nga nalate ako.
Tae, nakakainis talaga!

“Paano, naunahan ako ni Nikko.. Nakipagkarera hanggang sakayan.”

“Umasa ka pang mananalo ka run, he’s a member of track and field di ba?” Pia said.

“Baka swimming team.” I corrected.

“Ay, mali pala.”

Here’s 4C. My class.
Puro babae, at mortal na kaaway ng mga taga 4B.

I’m the class president, Mannellie Delos Santos. The vice president is Rena Bravo and the secretary is Pia Antonio.

“Tsk. Nakakabwisit talaga!”

I really hate that guy.

Oo, cute siya – No, gwapo. Matangkad. Magaling na member ng swimming team, girl friend niya si Aileen na taga 4A, at isa siyang napaka angas na tao!

Mayabang, maangas, mayabang, akala mo kung sino, mayabang, papansin.

MAYABANG.

Arrgh.
Kainis talaga siya!


^^^^^^^^^^

It was P.E. time, at oo, recess ng 4B that time.

“Pumila nang maayos!” Sir Bren ordered us.

Pumila kami at nag arms forward.
Thw hole 4B sat down on a bench to watch us.

Dang! They were laughing, hindi naman namin alam kung bakit.

I glared at Nikko, na nakatingin naman sakin.

He smiled at me, lalong nag init yung dugo ko.
“Ms. Delos Santos, lead the stretching.”

“Ha?”

“The warm up, please lead.”

“Y-Yes Sir.”

Pumunta akong harapan, and dammit. Nasa harapan ko ang 4B.
They were chuckling.

I started the stretching with countings.

“1,2,3…”

Tumatawa sila habang nag neneck stretch kami, then the side stretch.

“How weird.” Nikko mumbled.

Patience, patience.

“Saglit lang girls ha.” Sir Bren left us.

Tumigil muna kami sa warm up.
“Hey, Manne. Heard you were late.” Nikko said.

“Ano naman sayo?” I asked.

“Wala. Wala naman akong pakielam sayo e.”

They all chuckled.
“Anong nakakatawa run?” I asked. “Wala ka nanamang magawa sa buhay mo ano, Nikko?”

I raised my eyebrow.

“Hay nako, naaawa ako kay Aileen. Ang dami dami namang lalaki sa 4A na mas maayus ang istura at ang UGALI kesa sayo, pero ikaw pa ang naging boyfriend niya.”

He stood up and walked to me.

“Anong sabi mo?”

“Hindi mo ba narinig? O gusto mo pang ulit ulitin ko pa para sayo?”

My classmates went behind me for backup.
His classmates went behind Nikko too.
“Pasalamat ka babae ka.” He threatened me.

I smiled at him to show that I’m not afraid of him.

“Even if I’m a girl, we have equal qualities.. And I’ve been numb to whatever you’ve been doing.”

We glared at each other.

This is how we are.
Not really peaceful.. Ayt?



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#14  2009-10-29 02:18:59

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#15  2009-10-29 06:26:56

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ang gandaaaaaaaaaaaa...


update na
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#16  2009-10-29 07:02:05

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wuhooo. new story.
ganda ah. enemy

#17  2009-10-29 07:45:36

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haha, para akong nagbabasa ng manga.
ganda aah, update na.

support talaga ko 'to para makabawi. LOLS. ;)


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#18  2009-10-29 08:50:41

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HAHA. Ano ba yan, is World War coming? :lol: Jkk. Next na, ang ganda. :wow:


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#19  2009-10-29 09:22:39

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update na ulitt.
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#20  2009-10-29 09:37:58

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really nice story!

i'll support this one!




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