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Is this the end of the moment or just a beautiful unfolding of a love that could never be or maybe , I wonder, if maybe i could be all you ever dream , cause i'd rather be anywhere but here without you ..



Lalayas ako sa bahay, just to find Peace! ~ i found an apartment nearby my school , i told my mom and pumayag naman siya .. Hiwalay sila ng dad ko .. yea , maybe now, you all know the reason why i will ran away , to be away , di ko matagalan ang step mom ko. plus! ung mga step kapatid!

Why is it that my 'rents gave up on each other easily ? 7 years old ako when they separated , dad got married again when i was 9 , then mom went abroad to work , alam niyo ung feeling nun , though malayo si mom, she keeps on calling , 4 times a week just to check if i'm still alive? and yea. mom's giving me money every month .

Me? i was 19 currently, I guess i'm strong , sa lahat ba naman ng napagdaanan ko for the past years .. ngaun paba aku susuko ? xD , well, tonight i planned to be away here ! kung kelan sila tulog ! di q rin naman kailangan ng blessings nila. though i left a letter for dad , =) i know he'll understand :) btw, the name's clairene , claire or ren, whatever, suits yourself..

AND OFF I GO .. telling you. 3rd floor pa ang unit ku .. 302 xD goodluck for me then! :D


Feeling qo may nasilip ..

"Hi.." said the voice .. he said.
"yes?" i asked.
"Gabi kana lumipat ? ayy! 12:30 na pala.."
"anu naman sau ?"
"ahm, wala lang, neks unit aq. 303! cge. " he smiled and left.

weirdo ? xD

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hmmmm...

mukang maganda ah..

hehe..

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New storyyyy, this would be great again. :D Next na ? :eh:


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yes new storry, maganda toh :D
next na;)


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looks very interesting :D

ill go 4 it.!!

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Nice :) support ko to :)

Next na :D



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Wow! Kinda interesting! ;)
Susuportahan ko kaya to! :D


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Yay! New storii!
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Unit 1 - Moving On


saktong 12 am. naglipat aku.. ndi naman kaya may sumunod sa aking ghost o spirit or something? haha. such a brave little girl , oh! not little girl.! xD hay. 302! as i was walking upstairs . corney walang elevator ! i can feel that this is really the start for me living on my own!

though i'm supported by my mom. i wasn't scared naman na magisa. oh! don't talk about ghost! i'll kill you.. :) i decided to call aika for this moment of my life, she should know!

"hello?" aika's voice - my bff for almost a decade now! xD
"aika,! you wouldn't believe this! nandun nq sa unit! whoo."
"ren naman! don't you know what time is it? you crap!"
"umaga na! kaya gumising kana!" i laughed!

"naah! see yah tomorrow sa school i'll hang up na!"
"wait! di aku papasok eh! punta na lang kau dito.."
"ahh! talk to you tomorrow!" then she hangs up!

oh! crap! ambastos talaga nun si aika. teka, mas bastos aku diba? haha! oh well. haay. the unit is good for 4 person i think. it's huge for me. peru i know na kapag bumili nq ng mga gamit. magiging masikip din toh! :) i want a japanese style . i'll call mom bukas at sasabihin q na bibili aku ng little sofa and dinning set for me :)

teka, Feeling qo may nasilip ..

"Hi.." said the voice .. he said.
"yes?" i asked.
"Gabi kana lumipat ? ayy! 12:30 na pala.."
"anu naman sau ?"
"ahm, wala lang, neks unit aq. 303! cge. " he smiled and left.

weirdo ? xD ~ aww sa sooper excited q., i forgot to close the door. stupid me! haha.. teka. sino naman un , next unit 303 ~ hmm. oh well. buti mabait naman .. :) good start ren! :)

NEXT MORNING

i went outside .. unat dito. unat doon.

"grabeng unat yan ah!" he laughed
i looked ! oh that guy ! "problema?" i asked
he just laughed "taray ah! btw, i'm christian!" he smiled and inabot ung kamay..
"clairene!" i abot my kamay too
"clairene? may nickname kaba?"
"merun." stretching .. stretching .. "clair or ren bahala ka!"
"ah.. ok. ren, is that good?"
"sure. whatever!"

"gotta get going i don't want to be late.." he said then went inside his unit.

after 10 minutes. i also went inside and decided to just go to school. rawr!! christian, anu keang ginagawa niya. ohh! i mean! san xa napasok. parang magkaedad lang naman kami, he's wearing glasses, nerdy style , tall, maputi, medyo payat na medyo mataba? haha. tama lang.. :)

SCHOOL

"ano ren! i thought you're not gonna be here today?"
"i miss my chair so aun pumasok ako."
"tomato sauce? haha! anyhoo. tara sa unit mo ha!"
"oo talagang sasama ka dahil sasamahan mq bumili ng gamit for my unit! japanese style! rawr!"
"ohh! envy mode! "
"duh! don't envy me! pity you!"

then pumasok na ung prof . eksena talaga oh!

"clair, clair." si gelo natawag, oo! clair! my ever dearest clair pa nga! di niya q tigilan! naiinis nq!
"whut?"
"sama din aku mimiea gusto mo? pagbubuhat kita.. :)"
Hmmm. "great idea of all your ideas! sure gelo! :)"

oh! i need to pee.

i went outside ofcourse ,. panget talaga ng university na toh! parang haunted house lang! hahaha! then dating gawain, natingin tingin sa room. hihi. xD, after mag cr, tingin ulet sa kabila naman! nyahah.

"baket ba walang cute talaga oh!"
"baket kaba naman kasi naghahanap ng cute!" he laughed.
when i looked, si christian? "christian?"  i asked
"oh, ren, how do you do?" he smiled
"hah! small world neh? dito ka din pala napasok."
"yup! :) next room..ocge ha. cr aku eh!"
"ok," next room? baket ndi qo xa napapancn? nasa next room ba talaga siya? weh?. next lahat unit, room!

pagbalik q ng room,. lana ung prof! yessh! tamang tama eh! haha

"ren, ito ung attendance for today! pumirma kana.." si mikki, taray talaga netoh!
"sure!" i said

"ohh! wala ng prof!! may meeting sila! nyahahaha! let's go guys!" si gelo! ito talaga kapag walang prof laging updated! well 2 class lang namen ngaun. corni ng school nuh?

"clair ano? ano? tara na!" si gelo
"aika?" i asked
"xempre! sasama aq! baka kung anung gawin ni gelo sau!" she laughed
"sama eh!" si gelo. nahurt agad eh!
"oh. tama na!" i smiled

i got money from my atm. wee. how nice naman si mom! :) and aun. we looked for a japanses style ! and found it! we arranged everything in my unit and it was a blast! we also take afternoon snack. di na lunch. haha and yes. they went home na. thanks to aika and gelo for doing their great part! my unit was cute now! :)

Gabi na naman. parang lastnight i was planning to be away. ngaun nandito na nga aq, sooper away.
phone ringss it's dad

"yes?" i said
"wer are u?"
"dad, i'm fine. don't worry about me."
"clairene! you go back here now!"
"ayoko!" i hanged up! ang kulit! i'm sure diwang ung mga peste dun dahil wala na aku!

text message from dad

Clairene get back here now or i will talk to your mom!

i just texted dad na wag na nga siyang magworry i'm fine, dadalaw na lang aku some other time.! rawr! makalabas na nga at makatikim ng sariwang hangin!

when i opened the door, si christian papunta na sa unit niya

"oh? kauuwi mo palang?" i asked
"ren, yup! :) from work. ocge ah, goodnight." he smiled

from work? working student? bilib! :) sooper exhausted his face. oh well.



. . . is this the end of the moment or just a beautiful unfolding of a love that will never be for you and me . . .

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Wow. HAHA. How nice naman.
Kulit ni Ren, pinapauwi na nga. :lol:
Anyhoo. Ayun, cute ng descriptions ni
Christian. =|
Craving for the update ;)


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kailangan ng umuwe:P
well, update na :D


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hhahaha..,,

next na.. ren wag na nga umuwi

andyan namn c christian hahahaha..

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yeah!! may updeyt na!!!

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Ren is very cuuuute. And I like Christian's uhh.. personality? Ha! Is that the right term? LOL.


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Next talaga lahat.
Nice Job love it.
Update it po ASAP ha.
geh UPDATE na po.


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nice update sis. :]]
ang kulit ni ren,pinapauwi na nga. hahaha.
wait ako sa next chap. :D:thumbsup:


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cutee :] i'll be watching out for this one. :]
next chapter please :D


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Paoff topic muna!



Unit 2 - Oh, what a gesture



That Night

Ohh, baket ganun? ndi aku makatulog? rawrr! hay ren, nagcocope ka palang sa bagong bed mu! haha! ur such a freak grabeh! xD . mabuti pang lumabas na lang muna aku.. haha.

Pagbukas q ng pinto.



"hi," si christian. nagkakape.. "oh? gising kapa?" he asked.
"eh hindi makatulog eh .." i smiled "ikaw ba?"
"ganun din." he smiled. "small world neh?"
"ha? ah.. oo nga. schoolmate pala kita.." i smiled "peru baket ganun? ndi kita napapancn?"

"ganun talaga ren" he smiled "biruin mo, next unit tau , next room pa." he smiled
"lagi ng next ano?" i sighed
"pagud kaba?" he asked
"uu. matagal nqng pagud. restless na nga aku ee. kahit matulog ndi ako nagiging ok." i smiled
"baket? ahm. sorry ha. intrigero talaga."
"mahabang kwento, wag na."
"sige na. mahaba pa ang gabi.." he laughed

"adikk!" i laughed.

then i started to tell my life story. :) kampante aqng magkwento sa kanya.. he did nothing but to listen and to look me in the eyes.. such a sweet gesture ..

"ha! ang tapang ah." he said "palayas layas na lang ngayon.."
"matapang lang kasee siguro may nagpapadala ng money.."
"kahit na.. matapang pa din." he smiled..
"wala aqng pera christian. sa iba ka na lang mangutang.." i laughed
"ndi naman dahil sa may kailangan aku kea q sinabi un oh. ren naman"
"loko lang.." i peace sign. :)

"tulog kana.." he said ,"papasok nq.. " he smiled
"ah, sige .." :) bagu aq pumasok ng room

"ren." he said
i looked "oh? why?"
"salamat, medyo nawala pagud q." he said
"ganun?" i smiled "sure! :) goodnight christian,,"
"goodnight ren." he smiled.



then pumasok nq sa loob. sa sala na lang aku natulog.. alam q malalate aku bukas. haha!

NEXT MORNING SA SCHOOL  .................................................................................... oo! late nga aku

"oh, ren? di ka pumasok kanina kay sir perez. haha. i think he miss you." si aika. tanghaling tapat eh!
"oh! shatap naman aika. puros ka issue eh!" i laughed
"ako namiss kita soobra" si gelo.
"naman? tanghaling tapat binabanatan mo si ren! go to park!" aika laughed
"haha! gelo kasi. eeh. wag ganun."
"aika ikaw ha! nahuhurt nq!" sensitib talaga si gelo
"joke lang gelo, ilabyu naman wag ka ng mahurt!" si aika.

"uuuy! now that's showbiz!" i said, nakakatawa talaga tong dalwang toh eeh. xD

masaya kaming nagtatawanan .. biglang ..



"mikki, come on! talk to me!" teka, parang familiar ung boses na un ah?
"oh shut up! i was waiting for you yesterday sa lobby! inuuna mo pa yang work mo!"
"miks naman! diba napagusapan na natin toh?"

when i looked, Tama, si christian  nga. si christian at si mikki? weh? ndi nga?

"christian, mabuti pa. cool off muna tayo.." mikki said. "space. kahit konti lang.."
"cool off? baket cool off pa? break na!" then he nagwalk out
"christian?" mikki shouted!
peru ndi naglook back si christian..

"mikki," i said
"whut? huh? oh come on ren! don't act as if you're really sad for me."
"are you okay?"
she looked at me "are you okay? duhh? as if! i know your celebrating inside as if i die!" then she nagwalk out din.

well, i was feeling a bit sorry for her. a bit ha! haha. you know kasi. she's my worst enemy since umapak ako sa university na toh! sabi nila she envied me daw kasi magaling daw ako. at naunahan ko na xa sa dean's lister.  such a envious gally. she searched about me noon~  everyday~ and she keeps on nagpaparinig na hindi daw xa magpapatalo. i was just laughing then. well. till now.

haha. oo, tama xa. natawa nga aku inside. so ironic of me. haha. xD .. teka, maiba tayo. sila pala ni christian. haha! hindi kasi sila masyadong showy, oh well. nakakagulat naman.. xD

Papauwi aku iniisip ko pa din ung nangyari kina christian.. haha. anu bang pakealam q? hmm
cguro dahil nakausap ko si christian kagabe kea siguro worried aku sa kanya.? haha! Hmm.



SA UNIT

Hmm. oo tama! inaantay q ngang dumating si christian..  makalabas na nga para sure na makikita qo xa.
then 30 minutes after.. ayan. nandyan na nga!

"oh. ren?" he smiled
"oh. maaga ka ata." i smiled
"ah, nagabsent muna aku sa work." he smiled "wait muq. bibihis lang"
"ah. okay." i smiled

........... ü


lumabas na siya.. "matagal ba?" he asked
"hindi ah.. " i said
"siguro marami kang tanong ngaun sa ken."
"panu mu nalaman?" i asked
"i saw you kea kanina sa room. napahiya nga aku ee!" he said
"oh? baket ka naman napahiya? " i laughed

"eh panu, alam muna.." he said
"sus! nagulat lang aku, kayo pala ni mikki" i said
"anung nakakagulat dun?" he laughed
"medyo ndi kasi kami ok ni mikki,. siguro kapag nalaman nun na magkatabi unit naten., ipasunog nq ng buhay."
"baliw ung babaen un! di niya maintindihan na kailangan q din namang magtrabaho"

"baket mu nga pala kailangang magtrabaho?"
"scholar aku ng university. katulad mu. lumayas din aku samen." he laughed
"weh?" i laughed
"yah! believe it or not!" he smiled "ok naman family namen , peru ayoq na lang talaga sa haus and besides malaki nq."
"talaga lang ha." i said.

"parang ndi ka naniniwala eh! hindi na nga aku magkwekwento.." then sumeryoso muka niya
"ah.. christian.. sorry. nagloloko lang naman aku.." i smiled

he looked at me and smiled.

"pasalamat ka ang cute mong ngumiti .. " nagblush naman aku don!



. . . is this the end of the moment or just a beautiful unfolding of a love that will never be for you and me . . .

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new reader here...hahahahaha


i labet...ur sturrii is great...


CRAVING FOR UPDATE!!! :D

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wahhhhhhhhhhh ang ganda.....

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