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#1  2009-09-30 21:32:28

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Realm of Heroes (Chapter 13 Released) Readers in Need!!!

This is my first time in writing a story, well, here's the prologue:

Prologue


My name is Zakk Cloud. I’m just a typical teenager living in a typical suburban town. I live in the year 2050. Oh yeah, I almost forgot… I am a Level 70 Ninja, Not in the real world, but in an online game called Realm of Heroes.

Thing became much better in the future, my father always tell me “Videogames are a bit dull in our time, you have to play with your hands…” Well, in the year 2050, you just slip a suit on called “Adventure Suit” which is primarily the console, and put the helmet on, and voila! You are now in the “Realm of Heroes”.

Well, this is my story.....

To Be Continued….

I'm gonna post Chapter 1 later today if someone even notices this...

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#2  2009-10-02 09:24:34

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Sigh, whatever, here's Chapter 1:

Chapter 1
“New Game”

“Rise and shine sleepyhead!”

My brother, Leon Cloud, 2 years older than me, videogame addict like me, woke me up…

“Today is the day dad is gonna buy us a new console!”

“Ok, ok, go downstairs and tell dad I’m gonna get ready.”

Well, today is the release of this game called “Realm of Heroes”, dad just got a salary raise, that’s why he’s gonna get us a new console, 1 for me and one for Leon…

I got ready and went with my Leon and my dad to the Game Planet, a local gamestore. There was a long line when we got there. I saw my 2 best friends, Drake and Zoe. They were videogame addicts too, and they were gonna get their own console too.

“Hi Drake, Hi Zoe.”

“Hi Zakk”

Drake is my childhood friend, we always hang out, we even play vintage videogames, like “Guitar Hero 5” and “Dynasty Warriors 6: Empires”. Those were the games my dad used to play during his childhood.

Now Zoe on the other hand, I just met her during my Freshmen year, then after a year, we became best friends. I sorta have a crush on her.

The three of us always play MMORPGs, we even have our own guilds. We dominate every MMO we play, our guilds always reach the top 10 guilds in the MMO, Our Ninja, Archer/Spellcaster/Healer and Warrior tandem is so unstoppable.

“So Zakk, you gonna get your own console too?” said Zoe

“Yeah, even my brother will get one.” I answered

“Cool, so which class are you gonna get?” Drake said.

“Class?”

“Yeah, this new MMO has only one class per console.”

I stopped there for a second, I just saw my rival walk out of the store, carrying a “Brawler Class” Console….




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#3  2009-10-02 09:27:41

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Nice story! ;)
Please avoid double posting.
Anyways, it's kinda interesting. ;)
Though I'm not playing videogames.
But anyhoo~~still waiting for next chapter.

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#4  2009-10-02 13:09:33

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nice!
i love the names!

the name zack and cloud was the characters in FF7, right?

keep it up, dude!
i'll support you.

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btw, looks like your a VG addict, eh?
we're cool, man!
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#5  2009-10-02 20:56:50

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jheyann wrote:

nice!
i love the names!

the name zack and cloud was the characters in FF7, right?

keep it up, dude!
i'll support you.


btw, looks like your a VG addict, eh?
we're cool, man!

yes, they are from FF7, and i am a vg addict!




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#6  2009-10-03 00:28:43

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hey, Ads! haha.

nice :]

it's Micah. :) Haha.

This is a cool one. I'll support this, for real :)

c'mon! c'mon! Update! Update! :D

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#7  2009-10-03 02:19:43

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hey, Ads! haha.

nice :]

it's Micah.  Haha.

This is a cool one. I'll support this, for real

c'mon! c'mon! Update! Update!

as you wish... here's chapter 2.

Chapter 2
“Enter Gizmo”


“Hi, Zakk.” said Gizmo

Gizmo, my rival, videogame addict too. We were rivals since kids. From catching all this monsters in a game called “Pokemon” to Unlocking every character in a game we both play..

“Hi.” I answered back.

“So, you’re gonna get your own console too? Haha, see you online!” said Gizmo in a taunting-like voice.

“What a jerk!” Zoe said.

“Don’t worry Zakk, we’re gonna beat him online.” said Drake.

We noticed that it’s our turn to get our consoles. We saw 5 classes of the console, there was “Brawler Class” “Swordsman Class”, “Archer Class”, “Shinobi Class”, and “Spellcaster Class”

“Welcome, my 3 best customers, pick your classes.” said Barry, the gamestore owner.

“So which one will you pick, Zoe?” I asked.

“Well, I’m gonna pick Archer Class, so I can back you guys up.” Zoe answered.

“I pick Swordsman!, I can be the tank of the group!” said Drake.

“Ok, I pick Shinobi Class.” I shouted.

“What? Ninja again?”

“Admit it, you can’t win without a ninja!”

“Alright, alright, you get the ninja.”

We paid for the consoles we choose, but we got 10% discount because we were friends with the owner.

“Wait, here are the guide booklets, and freebies, a real toy weapon with each of your classes, so you can practice when the power in the town is down.” Barry said.

“Cool you’re the best, Barry!” we all said in chorus.

“Cool, see you next time kids!” said Barry.

“Wait, where’s your brother?” Zoe asked.

“Oh, they went ahead when we were talking earlier.” I answered.

So we all bid our farewells and went back to our own homes, We agreed to look for the 3 of us first. With our own usernames.

I saw my brother in the living room, already playing with his console, I saw the markings in his console, It says “Spellcaster Class”. I set mine up and got in the suit-slash-console.

As explained from the guide booklets, It controls your brainwaves to make it look like your in the game itself.

After I wore my helmet, I just saw my first view of “Realm of Heroes.”

To Be Continued….




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#8  2009-10-03 08:42:43

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wooooh.
This one's really cool. This is the real deal.

Two thumbs up, man. :thumbsup::thumbsup: You got the brains.
I'll be waiting for the update.

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#9  2009-10-03 08:43:17

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it's really cool!
update!
haha.


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#10  2009-10-03 09:58:14

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Thanks for everyone who liked my story...




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#11  2009-10-03 10:02:03

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it's really good, y'know. :)


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#12  2009-10-03 22:49:25

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oh? what's next?
c'mon, update!
I want to know what's with that Realm Of Heroes :D




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#13  2009-10-04 21:27:58

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Here we go! Chapter 3! Sorry, I was busy yesterday...

Chapter 3
“Zephyr City”



“Watch your back!” a spellcaster said.

I dodged the attack of the thief, then I looked into my inventory, I saw some kunais, then threw them at the thief.

“Bullseye!” I shouted.

“Good throw, small bro!” said the spellcaster.

“Wait, Leon? Is that you?” I asked.

“Yep, nice outfit, Zakk.”

“You too, I didn’t recognize you in those robes.”

“Well, where are we?”

“I asked some NPCs, they say this town is called Shadowlore.”

Shadowlore, I looked around with my bro. Shadowlore is a small town. There were a lot of Shinobis and Spellcasters. I guess this is the starting point for these classes. I started to wonder for a second…. What about the Swordsman and Archer classes? I turned back to my brother and asked;

“Hey Leon, do you know what and where is the capital city of this realm?” I asked

After some time, we learned about “Zephyr City” the capital city, we even bought a world map from the item store. Leon was studying the map.

“So Leon, which way to Zephyr City?” I asked.

“The map says we should head north.” He answered back.

Our journey has just begun.

Drake and Zoe’s P.O.V.

“Drake, where are you?” Zoe shouted.

“I’m right here! Wait up!” Drake shouted.

“You look pretty cool in that Archer suit, Zoe!”

“You too Drake”

I’m Drake Razor, Best friends with Zakk since childhood. We are really close, but Zoe, we were her classmates in the freshmen year, then after some time, she hang out with us. We were the only people who had the courage to talk to her. “She’s pretty” that’s what Zakk says everytime I ask him about Zoe. But in my opinion, she looks kind of tough.

“So this is Imperial City, starting point of Swordsmen and Archers.” Zoe said.

“How did you know?”

“I read the guide book, didn’t you?”

“No, I was gonna read it but I got too excited.”

“So where are we gonna meet up with Zakk?”

“He said we were gonna meet up with him in the capital city.” Zoe answered back.

My name is Zoe Quiver. We just moved in this suburban town last year to start my high school years. I met with Zakk and Drake on the first day of classes. I’m too shy on my first day of classes, but Zakk and Drake we the first ones who talked to me. Then we became the best of friends. Drake was like the comical guy of the bunch and Zakk is some kind of a cool leader.

“Where is this capital city exactly?” asked Drake.

“Zephyr City, to the south” answered Zoe.

“OK! Let’s stock up and get ready to go to Zephyr City.” said Drake, excitedly.

Our journey has just begun.

To Be Continued…




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#14  2009-10-05 03:30:41

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cool!
i imagined it as RAN.
hoho.
that's the only OL game i know. :P

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#15  2009-10-05 03:58:31

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nice story
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#16  2009-10-05 09:53:11

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as you guys wish

Chapter 4
“Level Up”


Zakk and Leon’s P.O.V.…..

Me and Leon stocked up some potions, I bought some equipment with my starting money while Leon spent all of his starting money in mana potions and spellbooks.

“You ready Zakk?” asked Leon

“Armed and Ready” I answered.

We were heading out to the town gates, when suddenly, a fellow Shinobi stopped us.

“Wait for me!” shouted the Shinobi

“What do you need?” said Leon.

“I-I was gonna ask you guys if I can come with you to the next town…”

“Zakk, you want to accept his request?” asked Leon.

“Ok, but do not drop your guard, this guy might be a thief, PK, Hacker or whatever.” I whispered.

“Hey Shinobi, sure! You can come with us!” I shouted.

“T-thanks…”

We set out to Zephyr City, but we have to stop by this next town called “Ivalice”.

While walking in the forest, We Introduced ourselves to the Shinobi, the Shinobi looks like my age, but he’s thinner than me.

“So Shinobi, what’s your name?” I asked.

“Oh, Mm-my name is Adz” the shinobi answered

“So what are you gonna do in Ivalice anyway?”

“I h-have a quest, I need to look for an Ice rune. Some of the monsters near Ivalice drop them” he answered.

“Ice Rune?”

“Ice rune, yes, A rune can have many uses, like for example, the Ice Rune, you can ask a runemaster to attach it to your weapon, so your weapon can have an Ice element. You can ask the runemaster to attach it to your right hand, then it can amplify your magic too..”

“That’s a pretty neat system! I have to look for one too!” I answered in amazement.

“I-I forgot to tell you, there are 7 types of runes, which are; Fire, Ice, Water, Earth, Wind, Thunder, Light and Dark.”

“Cool!”

Leon stopped walking, I even crashed on his back, comical style…

“Ow!” I whined.

“Shh! What’s that over there?” Leon said.

“Aa-according to the bestiary, it’s an Ice Wolf. That means were on Ivalice territory…”Adz said.

“So it’s an ice type monster, time to FIRE up some spells! Get it?” said Leon.

“You know what Leon? That pun is soooo stupid!” I said, while pulling my katana from my holster.


“Leave me alone Zakk!” Leon bragged.

“Ok, let’s attack that monster, It might drop the Rune your looking for, Adz.” I said.

I charged by throwing shurikens and kunais to the wolf, while Leon was backing me up with buff spells. Adz started to do some jutsus, he was breathing fireballs to the wolf. For a second there I thought I defeated the wolf in a strong, powerful blow, But, it didn’t die that easily..Then suddenly, Leon casted a paralyze spell. Then Adz threw a kunai and it hit the head of the wolf. But, it’s still standing…

“This, this thing is strong…” said Leon.

“Leon, do you have any spells that speed up a person?” I asked.

“I have one here, but it only last 5 seconds”

“5 seconds is more than I need.”

Leon started to cast the spell, which took 20-30 seconds. It was very tiring to keep up with the wolf. When he was done casting it, it made me move so fast, I quickly dodged every slash, strike, and bite of the wolf. I quickly counterattacked by slashing and striking him with the remaining 3 seconds. After striking the final, strong blow, the Ice Wolf finally died. After the Ice Wolf die, A system messenger popped up in front of us, with a message for each of us.

“Zakk Cloud, Shinobi Class, 100 Exp Gained – Level up/ Next level: 500 Exp”

“Leon Cloud, Spellcaster Class, 100 Exp Gained – Level up/ Next level: 500 Exp”

“Adz Cliff, Shinobi Class, 100 Exp Gained – Level up/ Next level: 500 Exp”

“Oh Yeah! Level up!” Adz shouted.

“Anyways, Any luck about the Ice Rune?” Leon asked.

“Nn-no luck, all the wolf dropped are; “Ice Kunai 2x”, “Ice Spellbook” and an “Ice Katana”. ” He answered back.

“You take the katana, Adz.” I said.

“N-no, you take it, I can’t use one. I’ll just take the kunai.” He replied.

“Why not?”

“I-I’m too scared to go near an enemy.”

“Here, just take my old katana, just in case.”

We grabbed the loot and continued our journey to Ivalice.

To Be Continued….


As for the part that has my name... I'm too lazy to think for a new name.




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#17  2009-10-05 11:23:24

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haha. I like it. Now you're on the game, Adz! :D

i have something to say. there are a LOT of terms that I really don't understand like that Ice Rune. Wiii. :D i'm just telling you, no pressure :D

` be waiting. :D




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#18  2009-10-05 13:28:24

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#19  2009-10-05 13:56:40

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nice dude
next chapter na po :D




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#20  2009-10-05 19:38:02

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micahgarcia wrote:

i have something to say. there are a LOT of terms that I really don't understand like that Ice Rune.

A rune is a thing that makes people use magic or put an element into a weapon.




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