This is my first time in writing a story, well, here's the prologue:
Last edited by AdZ04 (2009-11-24 21:19:14)

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jheyann[?], micahgarcia[?], and lab.labsss :p[?] like this topic.
Sigh, whatever, here's Chapter 1:
Chapter 1
“New Game”
“Rise and shine sleepyhead!”
My brother, Leon Cloud, 2 years older than me, videogame addict like me, woke me up…
“Today is the day dad is gonna buy us a new console!”
“Ok, ok, go downstairs and tell dad I’m gonna get ready.”
Well, today is the release of this game called “Realm of Heroes”, dad just got a salary raise, that’s why he’s gonna get us a new console, 1 for me and one for Leon…
I got ready and went with my Leon and my dad to the Game Planet, a local gamestore. There was a long line when we got there. I saw my 2 best friends, Drake and Zoe. They were videogame addicts too, and they were gonna get their own console too.
“Hi Drake, Hi Zoe.”
“Hi Zakk”
Drake is my childhood friend, we always hang out, we even play vintage videogames, like “Guitar Hero 5” and “Dynasty Warriors 6: Empires”. Those were the games my dad used to play during his childhood.
Now Zoe on the other hand, I just met her during my Freshmen year, then after a year, we became best friends. I sorta have a crush on her.
The three of us always play MMORPGs, we even have our own guilds. We dominate every MMO we play, our guilds always reach the top 10 guilds in the MMO, Our Ninja, Archer/Spellcaster/Healer and Warrior tandem is so unstoppable.
“So Zakk, you gonna get your own console too?” said Zoe
“Yeah, even my brother will get one.” I answered
“Cool, so which class are you gonna get?” Drake said.
“Class?”
“Yeah, this new MMO has only one class per console.”
I stopped there for a second, I just saw my rival walk out of the store, carrying a “Brawler Class” Console….

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Nice story! .gif)
Please avoid double posting.
Anyways, it's kinda interesting. .gif)
Though I'm not playing videogames.
But anyhoo~~still waiting for next chapter.
Last edited by lab.labsss :p (2009-10-02 09:31:15)
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nice!
i love the names!
the name zack and cloud was the characters in FF7, right?
keep it up, dude!
i'll support you.
btw, looks like your a VG addict, eh?
we're cool, man!

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jheyann wrote:
nice!
i love the names!
the name zack and cloud was the characters in FF7, right?
keep it up, dude!
i'll support you.
btw, looks like your a VG addict, eh?
we're cool, man!
yes, they are from FF7, and i am a vg addict!

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hey, Ads! haha.
nice :]
it's Micah.
Haha.
This is a cool one. I'll support this, for real 
c'mon! c'mon! Update! Update! 
Last edited by micahgarcia (2009-10-03 00:31:13)
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micahgarcia wrote:
hey, Ads! haha.
nice :]
it's Micah. Haha.
This is a cool one. I'll support this, for real
c'mon! c'mon! Update! Update!
as you wish... here's chapter 2.

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wooooh.
This one's really cool. This is the real deal.
Two thumbs up, man. ![]()
You got the brains.
I'll be waiting for the update.
Last edited by darnGEEK (2009-10-03 08:43:44)

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it's really cool!
update!
haha.
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it's really good, y'know. 
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oh? what's next?
c'mon, update!
I want to know what's with that Realm Of Heroes 
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Here we go! Chapter 3! Sorry, I was busy yesterday...

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cool!
i imagined it as RAN.
hoho.
that's the only OL game i know. 
coolio, dude!
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nice story
update na po





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as you guys wish

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haha. I like it. Now you're on the game, Adz! 
i have something to say. there are a LOT of terms that I really don't understand like that Ice Rune. Wiii.
i'm just telling you, no pressure 
` be waiting. 
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update!!!
cool!!!
hoho.
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nice dude
next chapter na po 

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micahgarcia wrote:
i have something to say. there are a LOT of terms that I really don't understand like that Ice Rune.
A rune is a thing that makes people use magic or put an element into a weapon.

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