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#41 2010-02-07 11:02:46

NoOneKnows: ^{I dont know}; » FTalker; u.Sed.Hi..I.sed.Bye.; dunno; 181; 0; Today; Website

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wow.. gnda tlga!
updatee..

~~"don't always say that THERE'S STILL TIME.....~~

~~coz there's also a concept of TOO LATE......"~~

#42 2010-02-07 11:20:35

myukisan_29: ^Christine; » FTalkAddict; cute and nice; Taguig City; 330; 8; Yesterday; Website

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CHAPTER FOUR o TWO
Last night, it's a dream. Wait, No! It's not a dream it really happened. E di kung panaginip yun, e di sana sana, wala itong sakit na to sa akin. Yeah, a disease, isang sakit na hindi ko naman ginusto. Bakit ba kasi, bakit ako pa??
I have heart disease sabi ng doctor. It's inherited and I got it from my mother's side. I knew it when I was in grade six. Sabi nila, may butas ang puso ko, fragile daw ako pero I continued how my life was used to be. I've accepted it pero when I entered high school and have known Ruey, I questioned myself again, BAKIT AKO PA???
For years, hindi nagparamdam tong sakit na to. Para akong isang normal student na pumapasok sa isang normal school. That's why my mom and dad give me what I need, provided everything na kailangan ko kahit na wala na sila. That's why Manang Melba's always on my side. When I entered high school, I decided not to tell it to my new bunch of friends kahit si Erika hindi ito alam. Sumusunod lang ako sa sinasabi ng doctor yun lang. Pero sapat na ba yun? How will I be able to live longer?

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NEXT DAY; SCHOOL

"Ok ka na?"

I nod.

"Parang ang tamlay mo"

"Wala to,.,may iniisip lang ako"

"Don't stress yourself,baka um-"

Napatingin ako kay Ecka. Kaya lang tinakpan ni Mariel yung bibig niya.

"Di ba may assignment pa sa adv. chemistry? Tara na gawin na natin"

I just nod.

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Bakit ba ang tamlay ko ngayong araw. Katatapos lang ng klase, hindi pumasok si Ruey. I wonder wny. Siguro kaya matamlay ako kasi wala siya parang hindi kompleto. Kahapon, it's the first time na sinabihan niya ako nagusto niya ako and of course, I answered him na gusto ko rin siya pero why is he not here?

"Manang, ready na po ba yung dinner?"

"Oo, aba paborito mo yata itong niluto ko"

Habang kumakain kami ni Manang Melba

"Nak, may tumawag nga pala kanina nung nasa school ka. Yung kasama mong lalaki kagabi sa ospital. Tawagan mo raw siya mamayang 7pm"

I look at the clock 6: 45 pm na. Minadali kong kumain. Eksakto 7pm ako natapos. Tinawagan ko si Ruey.

"Hello"

"Ahm"

"Crisse?"

"Pinapatawag mo ko di ba?"

"hhmm??Pwede ka ba bukas? Sabado naman e"

"You mean a date"

"Ahahahah,.,oo nga date"

"sige,.,What time?"

"Sunduin kita mga 9am?"

"Uhm, sige["

"bukas ha?,.,Bye"

"Mm-Mm,.,Bye"

I hanged up the phone hen rush to my room.

How will it be kaya bukas???Excited na ako..

Deep in my heart, I'm suffering, knowing that I've lost you.
On the outside, I'm living, pretending that I've forgotten you

#43 2010-02-07 11:48:30

ms.rose13: ^charmaine; » FTalkManiac; Tropang Kalye; sA pUsO nIo!; 989; 22; Today; Website

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kawawa nmen si crisse..
vket sia pa tinamaan nun..

ayiieehh...
kilig si crisse...
maii date sila..
ahahaha..

most girls blend in
but i prefer to make a SCENE**..
i don't need to prove my SELF to anyone..
hating me make you any *prettie*..

#44 2010-02-07 11:57:23

Zhyy: ^ZYRA:]; » FTalker; ♥♥; 280; 3; Today

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excited na din ako ! - sa next chap . :] haha.

♦♦`What you SEE is What you GET `
Panu ba yan ? nakita kita .
So akin ka na ?:]

#45 2010-02-07 12:19:44

zheaisthria: ^{lee min mi}; » FTalkGeek; wide imagination, writer; Otakus society; philippines; 1022; 22; Today; Website

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na-excite na siya

puso mo dude
fragile nga yan diba
sige update na dork

#46 2010-02-09 12:29:42

myukisan_29: ^Christine; » FTalkAddict; cute and nice; Taguig City; 330; 8; Yesterday; Website

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CHAPTER FIVE o ONE

+*+BELIEVING+*+
Is my choice
I chose it because
+*+I LOVE HIM+*+
but is he worth my love?
+*+DO I NEED TO BELIEVE HIM, IF HE'S BREAKING MY HEART?+*+

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Nagising ako ng 7am kahit na puyat ako. Bakit? Kasi siyempre, pinaghandaan ko tong araw na ito. Yesternight I received a text message from him. Kita raw kami sa may park near my condo, and he'll be picking me up.
I slept late kagabi kasi I had to choose pa between my five favorite dresses.

Kaya lang sa sobrang inis ko. Wala akong napili. It ended up na "SIGURO MAGANDA NA TO. BAHALA NA SI BATMAN"

I just took a picture of myself with this dress that I think suits me. Something comfy,.,HAY.

Maganda ba???
Kasi feeling ko ang PANGET KO!!!

Time Check: 830 AM

Bumaba na ako sa first floor and pumunta sa park. I bring my cellphone and some cash with me.

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Time Check: 905 AM

"Asan ka na ba?" I muttered while sitting sa swing

I have been waiting for about half an hour. It's my fault din naman e, I went down early, I should have waited for him.

"Ate, ate" a boy is calling me

"Ano yun?"

"Nakita niyo po ba yung laruan ko?"

Umiling ako

"Hindi. Bakit?"

"Kasi po nawawala e. Tapos kanina pa po kayo dito kaya po tinatanong ko kayo. Sige po ha, hahanapin ko lang po"

"Sige" I wave at him

I look at my phone. It's already 915AM. If a guy would ask you to a date diba dapat 5mins before the time nandito na siya pero parang ako pa yata ang naghihintay. Sige, 15 mins. FIFTEEN MORE MINUTES.

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Time Check: 945AM

"Tama na!!"sigaw ko sa park ng padabog. Napatingin sa akin yung mga bata sa paligid pero I just ignore them.

Bumalik ako sa condo. I've already texted him ilang bese na. I try calling him sa cellphone pero naka-off naman ang phone niya. Siya yung nag-yaya, tapos siya yung hindi sumipot!!! EWAN!!!

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MONDAY

I am going to school. Nakita ko siya naghihintay sa may gate. I passed by, hindi ko siya pinansin, para anupa't panisinin ko siya, iniwan niya nga ako di ba?Iniwan? Hindi, pinabayaan pala!!!

"Crisse, can we talk?"

I faced him.

"Para saan pa? Para ano pa? Mag-sosorry ka? Fine your forgiven. Just don't talk to me again."

"Hindi yun. Sorry kasi,.,kasi"

"Kasi ano?"

"Kasi hindi kita napuntahan kahapon. At sorry kasi I broke a promise. Sorry rin kasi I know that you're hurt. Pero, can you give me another chance?"

CHANCE???

Another risk...

This time,.,

Paniniwalaan ko ba siya???

Last edited by myukisan_29 (2010-02-09 12:43:46)

Deep in my heart, I'm suffering, knowing that I've lost you.
On the outside, I'm living, pretending that I've forgotten you

#47 2010-02-09 14:17:44

zheaisthria: ^{lee min mi}; » FTalkGeek; wide imagination, writer; Otakus society; philippines; 1022; 22; Today; Website

Re: --I Thought You Were Mine-- EIGHT o TWO

it's up to you

haha

bakit ba hindi siya nagpunta??
update na

#48 2010-02-09 21:17:46

myukisan_29: ^Christine; » FTalkAddict; cute and nice; Taguig City; 330; 8; Yesterday; Website

Re: --I Thought You Were Mine-- EIGHT o TWO

zheaisthria wrote:

bakit ba hindi siya nagpunta??
update na

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geek, di ko alam e kung bakit hindi siya nakapunta

di bale,.,tanung ko

hahahahhaha

jowk...

you'll know it when I post ~~RUEY'S POV~~

oooopppppsssssss

ahahahahhahaha

malapit na yun

so wait for the next updates

Deep in my heart, I'm suffering, knowing that I've lost you.
On the outside, I'm living, pretending that I've forgotten you

#49 2010-02-09 21:36:02

ghetto_quiin24@yahoo.com: ^{Lorreign Khen Z. Valle}; » FTalkManiac; ghetto.quiin; caviteh; 983; 17; Today; Website

Re: --I Thought You Were Mine-- EIGHT o TWO

awww ..
bkt d xa nkpnta ??

update n poh .

i wnna know why .

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#50 2010-02-10 10:48:50

ms.rose13: ^charmaine; » FTalkManiac; Tropang Kalye; sA pUsO nIo!; 989; 22; Today; Website

Re: --I Thought You Were Mine-- EIGHT o TWO

uu nga vket d nagpunta..
explaine muna crisse..
sbihin mu sakanya..

most girls blend in
but i prefer to make a SCENE**..
i don't need to prove my SELF to anyone..
hating me make you any *prettie*..

#51 2010-02-10 11:34:07

NoOneKnows: ^{I dont know}; » FTalker; u.Sed.Hi..I.sed.Bye.; dunno; 181; 0; Today; Website

Re: --I Thought You Were Mine-- EIGHT o TWO

pinapatay ung mga lalakeng ganun. haha
updatee

~~"don't always say that THERE'S STILL TIME.....~~

~~coz there's also a concept of TOO LATE......"~~

#52 2010-02-10 11:39:55

cess21: ^{Princess Bernadette Gonzales}; » n00b; Angeles City; 68; 0; Yesterday

Re: --I Thought You Were Mine-- EIGHT o TWO

NICE Po next na. im a new reader

#53 2010-02-13 12:19:10

myukisan_29: ^Christine; » FTalkAddict; cute and nice; Taguig City; 330; 8; Yesterday; Website

Re: --I Thought You Were Mine-- EIGHT o TWO

Guys,., sorry for not updating the story yet

I may update this tomorrow night

Wish you'll be able to wait

+*+THANKS+*+

Deep in my heart, I'm suffering, knowing that I've lost you.
On the outside, I'm living, pretending that I've forgotten you

#54 2010-02-14 01:50:10

Zhyy: ^ZYRA:]; » FTalker; ♥♥; 280; 3; Today

Re: --I Thought You Were Mine-- EIGHT o TWO

nice update ha !
babalik ako mamaya ! hintayin ko updte mo ! haha :]]

♦♦`What you SEE is What you GET `
Panu ba yan ? nakita kita .
So akin ka na ?:]

#55 2010-02-14 13:48:31

myukisan_29: ^Christine; » FTalkAddict; cute and nice; Taguig City; 330; 8; Yesterday; Website

Re: --I Thought You Were Mine-- EIGHT o TWO

CHAPTER FIVE o TWO

+*+CHANCE??+*+
so stupid,.,will I think of it
+*+HMMM+*+
nuh-uh
+*+I LOVE HIM+*+
and sacrificing my time and every piece of my heart
+*+IS SO WORTH IT+*+
simply because
+*+HE'S THE ONLY ONE WHO MAKES ME SMILE+*+

"Don't be so serious Ruey. I wasn't not that hurt. We can still be friends" ok now I'm telling a lie. Ayoko na hanggang magkaibigan lang.

"Per--"

I held his hand.

"Just don't promise a thing that you'll be able to break"

He take off my hands.

"Ok, we're friends. Crisse, 'tol na lang ok"

Umiling ako

"Ayoko. I'll call you with you're name."

"Tsk,.,di bale na nga"

Hmm,.,anong nangyari dun???

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"CRISSE!!!"

It's Kirby. I wonder what's the big news. By the way, KIRBY DE JESUS is a classmate of ours. He became my friend and he's the only one that I'm close with sa 8 nameng boys sa room, of course except Ruey na yun<close din naman kami ni Ruey> pero not like kay Kirby, mas close kami nito. He has a crush on my BFF. And, for about three years niya na ring tinatago. Alam niyang gusto ko si Ruey and he's minsan our "bridge" for us to communicate.

"What is it?"

"Ssi-si" sabay turo sa labas ng room

"sino?"

"Teka, pahinga muna." 3 seconds "Si Ruey, nakikipagsuntukan!!"

OMO,.,tama ba rinig ko.

"HA?!! Why? Where? As in now? San? Bakit mo ngayon lang sinabi?!"

"tara bilis!"

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BOOGSSSHHH,.,BOOOOGGSSSHHH

"Ya,.,excuse! Teka bakit wala kayong ginagawa?!"

Andame dameng nanunuod ng away pero hindi man nila pinipigil yung dalawa!

"I'll not let you stay near to Crisse!" then Ruey punch the other guy

Aawatin ko sila.

"Hey stop" I said while rushing into both of them who's making a childish play

"Wala kang kinalaman dito. Stay away!"

"No! I have heard my name. What's happening?!"

"Hi Crisse" he walks into me like he's "astig"

"Ano bang kailangan mo?!"

He's in front of me.

"Don't dare touch her you fool! Crisse tara na!" he grabbed my right hand but then the other guy grabbed my left

"Hey!" tinanggal ko yung pagkakahwak nilang pareho "Stop acting as if you guys are so childish! And to all of you nice and warming audience" I'm pointing to those people who just watch by and not even dare to stop them two. I gave them a dead glare. " Tapos na ang palabas!"

Lumayas sa paningin ko yung mga tao. I faced the two with an angry face. Sino ba naman kasi matutuwa? Nag-aaway sila sa daan!

"Follow me, both of you!"

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Sinunod nila ako. We are now in the park. Ano ba yan. Kanina lang parang mga matatatandang nag-aaway. Ngayon mga batang inosenteng sumusunod sa nanay. AMP!

"Bakit kayo nag-aaway?"

SILENCE

"Ayaw niyo sumagot?" I get my things and stood up "Fine, no one force you two to answer, then I'll leave. Just remember that I'll not talk to both of you for me not to get involved"

Paalis na ako

"Siya kasi e" so childish, tsk

"ikaw kaya"

" YA! Ano ba kasi problema niyo?!"

"I like you!"

tama ba rinig ko???

SH*T!! Ang panget namang confeesion 'to!!!

And obviously mas gusto ko si Ruey

ARRGGGHHH

What will I do???

------Speechless------

Last edited by myukisan_29 (2010-02-14 13:54:34)

Deep in my heart, I'm suffering, knowing that I've lost you.
On the outside, I'm living, pretending that I've forgotten you

#56 2010-02-14 14:17:58

zheaisthria: ^{lee min mi}; » FTalkGeek; wide imagination, writer; Otakus society; philippines; 1022; 22; Today; Website

Re: --I Thought You Were Mine-- EIGHT o TWO

whoohh!!!

who's the other guy dork????

grabe yan
straight to the point na si ruey ah???

i really smell something huh

update ulit!!

#57 2010-02-15 01:26:42

Zhyy: ^ZYRA:]; » FTalker; ♥♥; 280; 3; Today

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Aha ! :]haba ng hair ni crisse ah ! btw. who's that guy ? next na

♦♦`What you SEE is What you GET `
Panu ba yan ? nakita kita .
So akin ka na ?:]

#58 2010-02-15 11:13:54

ms.rose13: ^charmaine; » FTalkManiac; Tropang Kalye; sA pUsO nIo!; 989; 22; Today; Website

Re: --I Thought You Were Mine-- EIGHT o TWO

speechless wahahaha..
xempre si riey na yan..
LOL!!..ahahaha..

most girls blend in
but i prefer to make a SCENE**..
i don't need to prove my SELF to anyone..
hating me make you any *prettie*..

#59 2010-02-15 15:23:17

myukisan_29: ^Christine; » FTalkAddict; cute and nice; Taguig City; 330; 8; Yesterday; Website

Re: --I Thought You Were Mine-- EIGHT o TWO

CHAPTER SIX o ONE

I'll ask again
+*+IS HE WORTH MY LOVE???+*+
I love him and I admit it
I'm contented of looking at him from afar
+*+WILL I MAY NOT BE MORE CONTENTED WHEN HE'S BY MY SIDE???+*+

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"Ya! Both of you! Stop fooling around!"

I leave them both. Ano ba!!! Eng*t ba sila!!!

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" Ba't ang tahimik mo ata ngayon?"

I nod

"May masama bang nangyari?"

Umiling ako

"yun naman pala e. Ba't ang tahimik mo diyan?"

I look at her

"Sabi niya gusto niya ako"

She was like>>>

"Ssssisi Ruey"

I nod

"WWwWOOOOOOOWWWWWWW"

Nagising ako sa katotohanan tapos biglang tingin sa mga classmate namin na lahat naman nagtitinginan sa amin.
Buti na lang wala si Ruey

"SSSHHHH!! Wag ka ngang maingay!!"

I grabbed her and we went sa bench

"Pano? Kailan? Saan?"

"Isa isa lang, ok?"

She nod

"Kasi ganito yun..." Kinuwento ko sa kanya yung mga nangyari

"E di confirmed na. Pero, liligawan ka ba"

Nagkibit balikat ako. Di ba nga iniwan ko lang sila.

"hay nako"

Napayuko ako. Kinalabit niya ako

"Crisse, speaking of"

Papalapit na sa amin si Ruey. He was from the gym kasi may practice sila.

"Uhm,.,Can we talk?"

I nod

"Maiwan ko na kayo ha"

Tinapik ni Erika si Ruey sa balikat. Then I look away from him

"Anong pag-uusapan natin?"

He sat beside

"Tungkol sa kahapon"

"Anong meron dun?"

I look at him.

"You just said that you like me, bakit? No malice, right?"

He held my hand

"You're wrong. Alam ko na Crisse, may sakit ka. Pero Crisse ever since. Two years, oo, two years akong naghintay para magkaroon ng lakas ng loob sabihin to."

His faced then became sincere

"Gusto kita. Gustong gusto kita. I'm not asking for friendship. I'm asking for more than that. Hindi ko pa alam noon na may sakit ka. Pero thinking na, you might leave me without me saying that I love you hurts me a lot. "

"Hindi pa kao mamamatay pwede ba. And you took all of that courage when you've known that I have this disease. Ruey, you're pathetic. OO, gusto kita. No let me changed it. Mahal kita since first year. Bakit ang manhid mo? Sabi mo mahal mo ko simula noon, nung mga freshmen pa tayo. Pero bakit hindi mo naramdaman na I have the same feelings towards you?!"

Tama naman ako di ba. Bakit ngayon lang?

"That's why I'm asking for one last chance. Please Crisse. Let me be with you. Let me take care of you kahit sbit lang ako sa buhay mo. Please."

He kneeled in front of me. I started to cry.

"Let me, please"

-----I don't know. I don't know-----

Deep in my heart, I'm suffering, knowing that I've lost you.
On the outside, I'm living, pretending that I've forgotten you

#60 2010-02-16 08:58:21

ghetto_quiin24@yahoo.com: ^{Lorreign Khen Z. Valle}; » FTalkManiac; ghetto.quiin; caviteh; 983; 17; Today; Website

Re: --I Thought You Were Mine-- EIGHT o TWO

persss ..

update naa .

Crisse ,
tnggpin m naa ..

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