sorry for double posting, but here's chapter 5
Chapter 5
“Trouble Straight Ahead.”
*Drake and Zoe’s P.O.V.
“So, How much for the Short Sword?” asked Drake.
“100 Gold.”
“I’ll take it.”
“Hey Drake! Done yet?” Zoe said.
“Almost done!”
Drake equipped the short sword with his starting weapon, a long sword. Zoe was using a longbow, with fire enchanced arrows, which blaze upon impact.
“Let’s go Zoe!” Drake said.
“Wait, don’t you think it’s too dangerous if the we travel only with the 2 of us?” said Zoe.
“Come to think of it, Let’s look for a tavern, maybe we can find companions there.” Drake suggested.
They started to ask directions, which lead the to a tavern called “Ozzy’s Place.” There were Swordsmen, Brawlers, and Archers. They started to look for strong people. They found 2 fellow travelers.
“Hey, Umm, we’re kind of looking for companions.” Drake said.
“Oh, were looking for companions too. Sure, let’s all travel together!” the first Swordsman said.
“By the way, I’m Drake and this is Zoe.” Said Drake.
“Hi.” Said Zoe.
“Hi Drake, Hi Zoe. Nice to meet you.” Said the second Swordsman.
“Oh, and by the way. My name is Lylle, and this here is my friend, Karl.” Said the first Swordsman.
The Swordsmen look like they were already training, They look like they are in level 2 to 3. The first one, Lylle, was equipped with an unsual sword, it was 2 meters tall and a half meter wide. It looks similar to the weapon of a character in a vintage game that me and Zakk play. I think it’s called “Dissidia: Final Fantasy.” But Lylle’s sword has an unusual shape.The second one, Karl, is equipped with dual katanas, what looks cool is the other one was enchanted with Fire element and the other was enchanted with Ice element.
“So, when do we leave?” asked Drake.
“This afternoon” We’ll give you guys time to explore the city.” Said Karl
“Ok, we’ll meet up here later.”
“See you later.”
We started to explore the city a little.We found a lot of things, from entertainers to performers. But what we saw just now looks like trouble…
To Be Continued.

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excited for the next chapter
update na poh 



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CHAPTER 6!!!

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hey, ads! haven't read chapters 5 && 6.
i'm not at home right now.
so i'm just gonna read them at home later.
okii?
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micahgarcia wrote:
hey, ads! haven't read chapters 5 && 6.
i'm not at home right now.
so i'm just gonna read them at home later. okii?
i see, as long as you read them 

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lol, 4th post.

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wii.. Really sorry.
I just read them now because I'm like SOOOOO BUSY. :[ especially because of the Mock Congress. But whatever.
wii.. I'm kind of getting the hang of this story of yours 
hey. and, umm, don't be discouraged on writing, ok? Because I know a lot of people who read this story only they're not Logged In to Ftalk so they can't post replies 
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Anyways... Here's chapter 9:

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next chapter please 
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as you wish...

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Twinblade,like in "Fable,The Lost Chapters" ba un,hehe 


next chapter poh 



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Sorry for doubleposting, here's chapter 11:

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Triple post? critisizm is greatly appreciated 

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haha. So you're really gonna change "AdZ"? hahahahahaha.
It's not bad naman ahh. I'm used to it already so please don't. 
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haha, i changed the name already.

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